As you may have guessed, yes, I shall be working on improving my Crusades paper. Personally, and not to toot my own horn here, I thought it a masterful piece of work, but that's just me. I am taking advice from the dreaded comment section (see: YouTube ) and am going to work on improving my support as well as my organization overall. My citations also apparently had some glaring problems as well, although I'm not sure if I should include this in my general categories of improvement. Whatever the case, the organization may need a little tweaking as well as some additional info I shall include per my associate's requests. A visit to the Writing Center seems in the undeniable future.
The paper itself, although I think it was well written, it felt that I was leaving out details, that I was missing some key aspects of my paper. Another thing I'll be sure to correct is tweaking my research question to really fit with my paper, as I seemed to have drifted from the original purpose. Whatever the case, I shall work diligently on fixing my technical errors in the bibliographies and some of my citations. I wonder if the Writing Center will be of any help...
~Charles
Interesting post. The language is good and the ending to the post was proper for the overall tone of the text.
ReplyDeleteI expect the writing center will be able to help, and I am also happy to help. You have a good plan here. Your paper was beautifully written - correcting citations issues and making the project of the paper better match what you lay out in your introduction will definitely make it even better. I look forward to reading.
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